literature

Five Little Words

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Your life changed me forever.
Forever, changed.
Life changed.
Your life...
m--your life--e, forever.
Life? ... changed.
Forever changed.
Your me. Forever.
Changed: life, me, Forever.
Your life changed?
Forever life changed.
Changed me.
Me? Forever?
... your "forever" changed.

Life?
This is an experiment I did to write a poem using only five words, while adding meaning with punctuation, word order, etc. Also, I did write this from a particular conceptual perspective, but I would rather you take it as you're inclined. :)

P.S. In line 8, it is indeed supposed to be "your" and not "you're." Everything in this poem is deliberate. :meow:
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